Wow!! that was somewhat dark and thats something i didn't xpected from u..but just look at the way u wrote this one....amazing dear..this was just toooo deep. lovely piece of work for sure.

this one just shocked me 2 b honest & as u know i love dark poems...this one is certainly the best poem i hv had from u.

all the best forever!!

Nice... I loved the ending... Keep up the good work...

Much Love,
Ipsita

Nice one bharti, you write very touching poems. 5/5 of course, Keep writing and posting and do get in touch when u get time!

Amit

Nice one bharti, i love reading your poems, i have to give this one 5/5 of course. keep writing and posting. ill try to get more poems up on mine when i started thinking:P
bye bye

Cassie

Great wrk, keep writing hun sarah x