Wow!! this was 2 good 2 b honest. u r an amazing poet!! u certainly used some real powerful words
loved the undergiven stanza...as this is so damn practical...this is what poeple do w/o realizing that what diff does it make if we do the same thing too *breaking heart*

You used me, I used someone too,
So that makes me no better than you.

take care and all the best