My Son Neighbour's Hell

by End Of Eternity   Jan 9, 2006


My elder brother and my parents
that is what i had as my family
though i loved every moment with them
but wished if i had one more member in this lovable tree

a younger sister is all i always prayed for
sweet, chirpy lovable angel of our soul
i just never prayed for anything more
would have loved her like my baby for sure

though too possessive i would have been
the only way to save her from sins i have seen

my father too always wished for a daughter
but both of his attempts just couldn\'t change
the way his dreams were slaughtered

and there came two frantic sons
in the name of prank, they were big guns

well then came a time in my life
got married and soon my wife was expecting
same prayers started after so long
begged for long awaited Queen but came The King

that tender smile of my baby reminded me of my childhood\'s tree
and then everybody complimented, "so cute...& he looks just like me"
such wonderful feelings i had that i just cant tell
wait a minute!!...

what if he not only looks like me but is like me??

well dear neighbours all i can say....welcome to HELL!!

** i really mean whatever i said...moreover my son's birth date is 1 April...imagine the sort of prankster he is going to be..:o) now its my time to be scared!!! :o)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    This piece brought on the smiles. I can't imagine anyone not wanting you next door :)

    what if he not only looks like me but is like me??

    well dear neighbours all i can say....welcome to HELL!!

    I love this ending ...lol.....Your son is very lucky to look like you. I hope he turns into a kind and caring man just like his Dad.
    Excellent job dost.
    Love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    Hehe, i especially loved the ending on this. I'd love to have a birthday on the 1st April but i guess i'll just have to settle for November 29th =)
    w00t!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    You know I loved this poem about my Cutie. Quiet surprised why I never commented on it. Well, all I can say in shortcut is like fater like son. :-)

    Great job on telling the story. Absolutely adored it.

    Lots of Love
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by EmptyEyes

    Haha. kool.

  • 18 years ago

    by chavii

    Well same question ,do u have kid ?
    If yes congrats n if its fiction , i enjoyed reading it lot .

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