Hello all members/readers!
I welcome all your commemts on my work and suggestions to improve it.
Thankyou!

Great poem it is really good
love always
tabby

Nice job.. I really liked how it told a story... It flowed beautifuly and was just amazing.. keep it up

sammie

Wow I loved this. The words you used, the description, the flow it all just came together wonderfully. Great job 5/5!

Aww that is so freakin cute.. Another great write..
!^I Love Being In Love^!

This poem is great. I love the words. Hahahahaha it's awesome. But I don't like the format, I am very picky on those types of things, I don't believe ones poem should go from the left side all the way to the right side, I think there should be some space in between. That's just me though.

Good poem.

Beautifully done. The flow was extremely graceful and I cannot say that about everybody.

Lovely poem