Good poem although i couldnt quite get into it but like i said b4 like the work keep it comin x chell x

I really like this poem it brings on a wave of empathy as Iam sure most of us have felt this way before at one point in time. Thanks for commenting on ma poem...I would luv to hear what you think about more of them. Peace

WOW its like lauren is your world, which i kno how that feels. She esced you and saved you from making hte biggest mistake of ur life...

wow i love it.

:) Lissa