I'm going through my own shit
by Krysten Jan 9, 2006
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I'm going through my own shit |
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16 years ago
Amazing poem...
this is my fav out of all i read..
awesome work..
keep it up.
i can relate!!!!! -
17 years ago
by Fsams
This is a different poem I have read and as we say variety is the spice of life, this is cool. The repitition had a clear funtion in your poem. Thats written with creativity and a different perspective. You owe 5/5 always
Tc With love
Fsams -
18 years ago
Great peice. the repitition of the line though out works very well, the flow is good and the ryming does not seem forced.
5/5 -
18 years ago
by Lexie
The concept is wonderful. Not sure how i feel how the same line, every other line. But it is a good poem.
