Sorrow love

by VioletRaven   Jan 9, 2006


I wanted you to kiss me,
But I taste of bitter tears,
I wanted you to know me,
But my life's in disrepair,
How to stop this wanting?
I live for your sweet lies,
I never meant to fall for you
My weak heart is my demise.

Love came for me on raven wings,
By light of silver moon,
Now my love has flown away
Why did you leave so soon?
If pain could stop my heartache,
I'd bleed each night and day,
If death would heal this sorrow,
I'd flee without delay.

*Kind of old but I thought I'd put it on anyway*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    I wanted you to kiss me,
    But I taste of bitter tears''

    I love the beat to those lines imparticular.

    Lv A, x

  • 18 years ago

    by President Dead

    Not bad, still a great poem but not one of your best i think

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    It's so sad!! Words have no limit when it comes to describing this poem. I have none, but know that I think this poem is awesome.

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is a gret poem, really expressed yourself well

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Oh my gosh... what a beautiful poem... I could really relate, and I loved the way you wrote this. You've got an amazing way with words, so I hope you continue writing!

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