by Jackie Marie Jan 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Scars arrived |
I know wher you are coming from sweetie. This is just so sad. |
Very nice. the diction was good but teh flow was a bit off. i give u a 4 |
by Kaylalala
I liked this poem. You make it sound like you're getting better so just be happy life is a special thing and should be appreciated because you never know when it's goanna leave you. By the way thanx for the comment on my poem. |
by Rachel
Wow...good work. I really enjoyed this one. Very passionate and sincere as to what you're feeling. |
Wow, so much emotion. truly an excellent poem. keep up the excellent work. |