by Jackie Marie
Wow It made me cry. I do feel sorry for the people who have lost loved ones because of stupid people who don't seem to care to much at all about anything. Great poem. I'm sorry if it happened in your family. |
by Bill Turner
Wonderfully written. People do not think about the damage they cause, the carnage within the remnants of the living, those left behind when they kill someone. Beautiful poem. |
by Chelsi
Good job Chelsey!! That was written different than i've seen before, i like it. Great job!! 5/5 keep writing! |
by Simon Hayes
Very sad - Brings the feelings home. Wonderfully written!! Well done :) |
Stunning Chels I love how you dug deep to get the emotion , awesome write :) |