Suicide

by amber   Jan 9, 2006


It's half past two and she ain't home
The lightning strikes outside
She don't know what he's goin through
The feelings that he hides
He hopes that what she said
She'd never really mean
But now he knows his nightmares here
And this ain't his dream
He grabs his keys and gets in his car
His mind swimming in hate
He prayed that God would take him
And end his troublesome fate
He spins out of his driveway
Heartache and tears blurring his vision
All he seen were the headlights
And felt the head on collision
The police take notes as she cries
And they carry the body away
"If i'd have known this would happen,
I'd never left today."
She'd never seen him crying
All the feelings that he'd hide
And then she knew at that moment
She was her husbands suicide.

by: amber
hope ya'll like it :D
comments are welcome along with critisism (i spelled that wrong)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    Wow! So sad but very good! Don't change a thing, it's perfect just how it is, I like how it tells a story as well as convey feelings.