Wow jess - I really like this - you should write more often 5/5 =)

Hey!! guess who!!
welcome to the dark side.....
lol
For someone who doesnt write poetry very often you are awfully talented
this poem was sad but lovely to read
I hope everythings okay...
Only someone amazing deserves you
great writing keep it up
emy
xxxxxx

Hey Jess, I like this. It's pretty simple, has a nice rhythm and i like the way you end by repeating. Its great a big old five for senorita