Jess thats brilliant - the poem that is. The topic is so sad how comes you never told me about this before: you know you can talk to me. Anyways I liked it - very poetic 5/5 =)

Very well written poem. well done.

5/5

Very, very great poem!!

The poem itself is beautiful, even though the message is incredibly sad. Your profile says you never wrote poems before really, but you look like you've been writing for years. Good job.