Aw thats so sad. Is it true?
I hope not. :(
The poem was very well written but some of the rhymes seemed a little forced.

0mg hun. that was deep. i h0pe its n0t true hunni. im here f0r u. very t0cuhng write 5/5

l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra
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Thet is sad U r good at Doing poems

Great poem, you wrote it very well.

Releasing your feelings will help sweetie.....great job
Love ya, Ann

My sister never did this to me but my parents have....so i kinda unerstand this poem....very sad....i didnt much like the last line it didnt make much sence to me but oh well 5/5

Aww babes.
I cried, it is so sad.
great poem even though it was really upsetting
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love Tara-Kay

Oh hun, that's really sad. i kind of fight with my sis and get really upset, but we don't even hit each other, just u know say some stupid things, and i thought it's only us, but after your poem, u understood that it's just nothing... anywayz, i'm really sorry for u hun. that is SAD! i am sure your sis will understand that she is wrong one day, but u gotta be patient and try to explain to her. but the poem was really great. Keep it up!