Awe that is so sad.. I'm really sorry about your "friend"? not sure if that is the right term. But you did a great job at expressing how you felt in this & I can really feel the emotions coming out of this poem. Great job on this.

This is really sad, no one should have top suffer through theses things, yet alot seem to, its depressing, well written free verse poem(although not my fave typ) it shows reat emotion, but i think it could be better if u went deeper and with more detail.

4/5

♥Lauren