The blaggard. (Ghazal)

by Steven Beesley   Jan 10, 2006


The blaggard:

The loathing heart like black sack cloth for him, the blaggard.
Begrudge all and everyone around him, the blaggard.

A small petty hoodlum in no other terms.
Conceited, boastful, so grim is the blaggard.

Oh he jests and plays at others expense.
But such a small mind, so dim is the blaggard.

Filled with so much vanity.
Tom foolery his every whim for the blaggard.

Inside he knows only darkness and despair.
To earn respect of others, so slim for the blaggard.

Ghazal:

Of Persian origin, poem comprising of couplets with a rhyme and a refrain: -

1st couplet:

_____________________rhyme A + refrain
_____________________rhyme A + refrain

2nd and successive couplets:

____________________________________
_____________________rhyme A + refrain

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  • 16 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Not my form of choice but well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by FELTON PHILLIPS

    I enjoyed the instruction and learning something new. Nice poem. Good instruction. Thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by Beautiful~*~Dragons~*~Fire

    It's a very good poem! I gave it a 5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This was interesting, there's many traditional/fixed forms I'm not familiar with and was impressed with this one, a really good flow with a definite meaning behind it.Very clever.I'll have to frequent your work more often, not just to learm more on the different forms, but because you are so talented and your poems say so much.

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    by stephyG

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