A Battle You Can't Win

by Darien   Jan 10, 2006


A Battle You Can't Win

Soldiers put down your weapons,
these two hearts have stopped beating.
Raise your white flags up high,
it seems the enemy has been cheating.

Lets just give up this stupid fight,
we have all forgotten who started the war.
These battles have been going on forever,
I don't remember what I'm fighting for.

'Sir, you've loved her for so long,
why are you going to let her win?'
"Private, this is a matter of life and love,
Breaking hearts would be considered sin"

Call in the troops we're going home,
there's no way we can win this one.
She fought me off for so long,
it's better we say she has won.

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  • 18 years ago

    by 111308

    Amazing Job! You Always Have A Way Of Grabbing The Reader! AndI Always Enjoy Reading Yours :D Fantastic! 5/5
    Love,
    Steph

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was different. :/ Really good though. I liked how you used it as soldiers and stuff. Sorry if my comments are really gay, I just don't know what to say, Cause all your poems are good. Lol.. =D 5/5

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  • 18 years ago

    by martha shaw

    It says it all........nice!!!!5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by midnights angel

    Your a good writer ive read a few of your poems so far and i like them

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade

    Nice write! My favorite stanza is the second one.

    -Taylor