Hey darien. h0w ya g0in darl. a very
t0uching write. i really like the way uve
written this. heartfelt hun. g0od j0b.

l0tz 0f l0ve/d0ra
-*x00o00x*-

WOW!! Great stuff Darien, this truly is magnificent.

This is really good. if im right on what your talking about. i know i have sure never wanted to give in, but with no good outcome back there was no use in trying anymore.

Damn it Darien, this is a masterpiece. Very unique and beautifully written. Captures many heartfelt emotions as well. I love it....

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Very unique Darien.
Good work.

Wow ! this is sooooooo friggin good !

Wow Darien, I love this! Very unique and written so perfectly, great job!

Muah! Loved it :) Nice writing, as always *tips hat* I love reading it!

Darien,
Just want to tell you that I love your poem, very sad and touching, but great my friend. Take care and good luck with your music. Friendly Hugs!

"All hail the Vietnam war
The second chapter is about to unfurl
All hail to the Iraqi war
A battle not worth fighting for"

WOW....this poem hit home with me....amazing write and thanks for your comments and concern i really appreciate it...I am okay! anyways i loved the poem its just sad because soldiers are not born they are made.....amazing job

take care
Miss.Scooby

Great Poem

Great write. unique style, great flow and concept. clever word play. a touching piece. very well done.

I loved it. You have a lot of talent, keep it up. :) *5/5*

I definitely agree that love is comparable to war, but if this is a life experience, then she's obviously not worth it, either because she has a good reason not to go out with you and she's being virtuous, or she's playing hard to get, in which case she's doubly not worth it!

Wow that was brilliant.

Great poem. It completely explains the dilema you can be in in those situations. Wonderfully executed great job. Looking forward to seeing some more of your work.

Great poem.

*Clouds n ur Is*

I haven't commented in a while, but this poem was great! You do a wonderful job in your writings!
BloodRedRose

Tragic..Yet Hit My Heart..h0p3 That Din't Happ3n 2 y0u...If so...Th!ngS w!ll g3t b3tT3r