You mean so much to him and I hope he shows it when he eventually reads this |
OMG!!!!! WHOS THIS OTHER GUY!!!!!!! |
by Mona
Wonderful poem. The end was so surprising! I didn't expect that at all! Very well done, I truly loved this poem, especially the end. Love ya -xxx- |
Very good. The ending was well done as a surprise. Interesting word choice. |
by ShadowDancer
Thta ending is so chilling. a brillient poem |
by RetroRavey
Excellent. |