Hole E Crap SiE......... I love it, it's amazing. Truly beautiful and loving, quite a powerful piece.

*******************************

Simon,
Your poetry is always so beautiful and
passionate...I love and enjoy reading
your poem. I feel so honored to read
such a great master piece! Great poem.
Take care and keep it up! Hugs.

*******************************

Simon,

Well done. I have one comment, that last line of each couplet should be a rhyme + refrain, the rhme part still needs a bit of beefing up. Hope you don't mind the critique. Good job!

Best regards,

Steve

Simon,

Well done on the amendments for the rhyming requirement for the Ghazal.

Best regards,

Steve