I remember you..

by Landon Carter   Jan 10, 2006


Sitting on a rock on a jetty,
in this cool breeze, listening to the sound of waves,
I remember you

touching your flowers with books, smelling their fragrance
I remember you

saving my falling heart
drinking the tears from my eye lashes
I remember you

sitting under the tree and looking at my lonely shadow
I remember you

looking at the moon beams, watching the twinkling of the stars
I remember you

looking at the time of love, hearing the heart beats, thinking of each moment
I remember you

that morning that evening, that day that night
when we were together, talking to each other
these winds remind me of every thing about you
come o love of my life, this love is calling you
in ever evening there is waiting for you
in the loneliness of each night is restlessness.

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Sitting on a rock on a jetty,
    ((What is a 'jetty'?))
    drinking the tears from my eye lashes
    ((I Loved these lines... You really know how to express words. Wonderful.))

    I loved this poem... It is really amazing, in my opinion. Speaking of lost loves in this was is wonderful; very creative. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Some Random Human

    I tend to prefer rhyming poems, but I enjoyed this. I know how wonderful love can be, and how much it can hurt to be without it, so I understand, and thought it was worded well. Good stuff.