Amazing, so sad and it almost made me cry....This really touched my heart, I love it!!! Just hope this isn't a true story, that would really make me cry...
Thnak for commenting on my poems, I really appreciate it. Yes all of my poems are based on my life and they are written from my broken and depressed soul....

Much Love Sabrina

It did make me cry. it reminded me of a friend i once had, her boyfriend beat her but she would never tell anyone, i thank god everyday that she is still alive. it was a truely amazing poem *hug*

What a sad poem,
so sad, but also so touching.
i dont know what to say.....
well done 5/5
xoxoxox mare

Its a very sad, but meaningful poem, and touching too.. well done..

Whoa, that is really, really good.

Great poem. i really enjoyed it nice work. keep it up.
Emma 5/5