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by Jorge Luis   Jan 4, 2004


1 day stood crying,
when 2 towers died...
but my heart's creation
neither falls nor collides...

3 summers stay hot,
& 4 winters polar...
but my senses burn,
as this soul grows more solar...

5 fruits r sweet,
& 6 even sweeter....
but this touch is candy,
& my taste never bitter...

7 doves shine,
& 8 angels gleam...
but my pledges are brighter,
& my love more supreme ...

9 + a million kisses,
& 10 X's a billion hugs...
to a virtuous princess,
who I yearn more than drugs.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ren

    Beautiful :) Def. 5/5 Great poem, keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Ill rate you 5/5

    plz comments to all my works to...

    by the way i am DIAN...

    and you?

  • 17 years ago

    by Dian PH

    I can't imagine that numbers....

    can be more

    meaningfull

    if it join with poetry version...

    wow

    i really more like it!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Dian PH

    I never try that kind of strutegies before...

    very nice ha!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Dian PH

    I never try to use numbers to make a poetry of my own...