Why?

by obsessedgurl   Jan 10, 2006


Why is my heart beating so fast,
And I feel I can't relax?

Why is my face turning bright red,
and I'm thinking about what you said?

Why do I have such a strong urge to see you,
and when you smile I feel like I've grew?

Why do I have no idea what to say,
And when you leave I want you to stay?

Why do I want you and no one else,
And when you're with other girls I'm jealous?

Why is it when you leave I feel so cold,
And your eyes are shinier than gold?

Why is it you keep me warmer than a glove?
I think It's because I'm in love...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hareem

    An insightful poem yet very enjoyable.
    Good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Leah20

    This was alright, I liked that you picked a rhyme scheme and stuck to it. However, the poem itself was a little childish for me. I suppose that it was because it was about love and I don't particularly like poems about love unless they're Shakespearian. The rhymes themselves were a bit childish too, but then again I suppose that is how one is when one is in love.

  • 18 years ago

    by l.M

    Very easy to relate to and very cute. thx for the comment on mine

  • 18 years ago

    by Reem O

    Ahhh soo cute... i really liked it.. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Robyn

    Aww i really love this one sooo much heart in it great work :)
    xoxo robyn

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