Really nice work...synerxx

As usual, this is another one of your amazing works of poetry! ;D 5/5

Really good!

Wow u are really good and inspire me to go deeper in poetry.
thanks alot!

diva

Wow i really like this cus i can really relate to and it it flows. this poem is so good!

That poem really hit home with me! good writing! i liked the fast paced rhythm. it was interesting.

A very good write. thanks for your comment. Jpoet*

I liked it, though I think it would have been a little better if in the end it was "I smiled/lied/cried/whispered and said okay." I just thinki it would have been a good ending. 5/5 though, it was a wonderful poem.