Comments : The Absence Of Love

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Touching, deep and sad! Wonderful write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Speechless....I have read some of your poems before, but I never commented (don't know why)... I just couldn't let this one go by without letting you know that I love it! The flow was great...truly amazing writing. You're very talented! ^_^ Take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Sad, touching and so emotional..... wonderful write.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    I don't favour this as much as I did with the last three poems. I don't like this type of rhyming scheme much.

    The idea is a bit cliche, but your wording is great.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!