Living no more.

by Passionate   Jan 10, 2006


Writing the same stuff
over and over.
quiet
yet no surrender.
storm comes
yet sweet tide roles in.
breath from my lungs
runs oh so thin.
can't breath
with or without you around.
ship wrecked,
heart strings pushed into the
ground.
sinking,
pirates aboard.
crying out,
"Save me O Lord!".
clouds rise
tides high once more,
ready and awareness,
living no more.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kandace

    Great poem and thank you so much for commenting on my poem...in your poem i totally get what its saying!! great job..keep it up!! 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is brilliant, very descriptive.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by CE

    Good job on the poem, I loved the structure of it