Me.

by avery   Jan 10, 2006


I just winged it on this poem and wrote what I felt, it's not a long poem with many words, but it still means a lot.

I'm Happy,
I'm Trying,
I'm Pretty,
I'm Lying,

I'm Angry,
I'm Lazy,
I'm Tired,
And Dazing,

I'm Ugly,
I'm Shy,
I'm Lonely,
But Why?

I'm Depressed,
I'm Hated,
I'm Abused,
And Faded,

I'm Sick,
I'm Dying,
I'm Gone,
Stop Trying,

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  • 17 years ago

    by Shaylee Rose

    Wow
    that was awsome
    5/5 for sure
    so little words
    but still so pwerful
    LUVD IT

  • 18 years ago

    by Cari

    Wow, for not havin a lot of words there is a lot of feeling... i love it. nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by jacquie

    I no what u mean when u say u wrote what i feel, n i have felt what u have writtern. i think this poem is realy good u just need 2 have a certain ammount of understanding

  • 18 years ago

    by Kittie

    Great Job! very quick, and flowing.
    5/5
    BloodRedRose

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Unique poem of emotions. Nice job, I sometime's feel like that

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