by Krystal Jan 11, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Ripping out my heart of gold |
by Darien
This is a really good poem.. the only problem I saw was using glee at the end of two different lines. Best to not rhyme words with the same word. But still a great poem. |
Wow i really loved this poem!! great worlk!! xoxox |