Wauw! *bowS* it sort of feels special, like an honor, to read your poetry.
This piece, is beautiful, and truthful.
It's kinda captivating, it makes you think.
I Love the fact that it's short, because the power stays so long.
Very well done,

~* TasH *~

Wow... veryy good i loved it and its so true !! great poem

xox pixie

I like this poem it something different, good job xxx