by ~~Lindsay Woods~~ Jan 11, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
All you guys out there, |
Good, but i think you could expand it more, give more feeling, get deeper. it seems to short(no offense) i think its a great begining and it'll and you'll go places! |
This one is good, but like your other one it's really short. I love how it rhymed and flowed though. |