Hey, this is very cute i liked it a lot. You used your words really well and the poem read well all the way through.
5/5

Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

L0t 0f em0ti0ns in this piece t0o. very t0uching.

l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra
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For me, i can feel the poems coming out of your heart. and i can almost see you putting your thoughts into your words. thats what i love best about your poems! ;D 5/5 and thanks for commenting so much on my poems!

This was just amazing!! most probably this is the first poem that i m going thro of urs...& i could sense that talent..right in my fav list u go straight away & i'll read as many poems as possible..soon!!

take care and stay strong

So much memories we had
some good,some bad
but the one that hurts the most
is seeing you love her
and having to let you go
and becoming just
a memory in the past....

That part literally made me cry. I'm going through this right now too... ugh I've been going through it for a while now =( Great writing hun

Whhooa, real truthful feelings for me to read them.. It made me think so hard, I love somebody so much, I dunno if I can let him go.. Great meanings, great vibe.

Beautiful. breathtaking. wow. i just love the way you phrase your stanzas. very unique and beautiful. a lovely tropical flower

I understand how that feels although I've never been through that, somehow I think I do...well, getting over some isn't easy, it takes time, but u will be fine...

What a beautiful poem!!

Ah hun i felt the pain in that...i hope you're ok.
xoxo