Thats kinda funny. lol. but its funny in a depressing way. very well done!

Funny in a very dark and depressing way....Sing along every body =0) Now I can't get it out of my head...na na na na na na naaaa. na na na na na na naaa....

Erm...
its a bit...sick to be honest! dont get me wrong, im not saying its crap...just that you shouldnt realy be proud of something like that and find it funny???
erm...

I like this , great idea!

Ok. i disagree with trixie. sorry, but i do.
you have this way of making me forget everything around me and just envisage your poem.
i was sitting there reading it, thinking of one of those little girls in horror movies, who sing nursery rhymes to theirselves to lighten their moods when theres a killer around the corner. so much pain, so young.
your poem was really good, and i'm not the kind of person who'd just say it to anyone. the rhymes flowed like the blood you seem to write so much about...crap analog, but you catch my drift. this is a good idea, i'm really glad you shared it with us, and got over your writer's block.

abbi xxx

*by the way i meant to say analogy, not analog. duh!

5/5. Lol, it's very original...and a good poem!
-Ur biggest fan
(lol, u proly knowby now!)

5/5. Lol, it's very original...and a good poem!
-Ur biggest fan
(lol, u proly know by now!)

This poem is great! I know what you mean by it!!

In an odd sort of sick way, I liked that poem/song thing being a cutter myself. I like reading your poems in general because they are honest and talk about the life you have had to live, a life that no one shoule have to, but one you keep trying to live, and for that I am very proud of you. You are amazing, please do not give up!

-Tainted Mikochan

That was great.

Its dark but also kind of perversly funny. in hort i loved it! xxx

Short* sorry i need to learn to spell! lol

OMg this sounds like something out of a horror movie IT IS REALLY good luckily I wasn't sitting at home by myself I think I would have screamed!!! if I could you would get 10/5 for that LUV KAL

Lol, That was great, Loved it how you used the original nursery rhyme twinkle twinkle little star. It was fantastic!!

luv natalie x-x

I love ur poems and quotes! u sound just like me

Lol nice...very very clever...haha.

Thats a very interesting poem to write like that! haha a new book: Revised Lullabys for children!

I love all your poems that i have read.. they are really good.. Keep it up!

[*]Breann[*]

Lmao wow i love dis poem great job on it. 5/5