by xDryTearsx Jan 11, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
My butterflies still flutter |
I have to agree with everyone else-and cannot think of more to say, |
BY FAR THE BEST YOU"VE WRITTEN..and the best I've read besides soem of my own. :) AWESOME..U a genius! lol |
by Emma
Awww.....*wipes away a tear*.... that was so good. i cried it is so true. i loved every word. keep up the great work. |
by Little Dot
Awesome job. These poems are all so brilliant. You have so much feeling and emotion. |
by Samantha
I really liked this poem and you did an awesome job with it... the only thing i can suggest to you would to dry to give just a little more detail... it will help it flow better... other than that the rhyming was great and so was the vocabulary.. nice job and keep it up... |