Heyyy! I really like this poem. It is very expressive and I can relate lol. I really like your writing. I read through a few of your poems and they are very well written!

~*~ Serenity~*~

It was magnificent. I liked your poem. *kisses her cheek* Keep it up.

NICCE word ussage..i wish you and james the bessst luckk in the world! LOVE IS AWESOME ALWAYS BELIEVE...all my poems are abotu my soon to be boyfriend johnnn..ym bestest guy friend. lol. you seem like an awesome person kristie.keep writn gurl! XXLISSA

I really liked this poem and you did an awesome job with it... the only thing i can suggest to you would to dry to give just a little more detail... it will help it flow better... other than that the rhyming was great and so was the vocabulary.. nice job and keep it up...

sammie

Awesome job. These poems are all so brilliant. You have so much feeling and emotion.

Awww.....*wipes away a tear*.... that was so good. i cried it is so true. i loved every word. keep up the great work.
Emma 5/5

BY FAR THE BEST YOU"VE WRITTEN..and the best I've read besides soem of my own. :) AWESOME..U a genius! lol

LISSA

I have to agree with everyone else-and cannot think of more to say,
I absolutely adored the poem,
In every single way...

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