Brilliant! wonderful flow, style, concept to this whole piece. i particularly liked the second stanza and the last lines of your poem. flawless imagery, beautiful poem.

Liked this a lot.. the flow wasn't always dead on, but that's not bothersome and maybe i was reading it wrong..

Meandering like a snake ere the kill,

awesome line in the heart of a great poem.. loved the flow of the ending two lines as well..

CONGRATULATIONS
You came 1st in my poetry contest
thank you for entering this wonderful poem
Keep writing
~Emma
*Wings*