Brilliantly written |
by ÀvÃL
Thank u so much and i have been always a fan of your poems...stay strong and believe in your self always....take care |
This is such a haunting write. beautifully morbid in it's essence of truth. well written! |
Haha how do you stalk the earth?did youmean walk? trive or something like that would work also but i dont think stalk fits...other then that great job very myserious!! 5/5 |
by VioletRaven
I think this poem works very well, the expression is dark and the words leave the reader haunted long after finishing. An excellent piece, well done. |
by shygirl
Thankz 4 readin my poem i read urs i really injoyed it n gave u a 5/5 |
by Leah20
Very nice, I really loved this poem. It is sadly true. Whether our virus be greed, selfishness or any other form of malice, it seems to be speading like wildfire throughout our world. |
by ASPHYXIATED
Heya! |
by Samantha
Wow this was so well written... it gave me chills when i read it.. you are so very talented and just an amazing writer... keep it up... |
by Little Dot
Wonderful work, once again. This poem was done so well. It has great imagery, and was amazingly written. |
by Darien
Excellent poem.. very dark. Each word pounding readers with intense fear. good job. |
by Allison
Very dark and very well written. You have a lot of talent. Keep up the good work. *5/5* |
by Rena
You are an amazing writer. keep it up. you truly bring out so much emotion!!! |
by Amanda
Brilliant piece of work hun, well done and keep writing. You have a great talent and i loved the poem. Thanks for reading mine :) |
M really having some fun in this site nowdays...great poets are commenting on my work and i m getting chance to know them...every day i m realizing how big this site is..:o) |
by Charlisha
Im just takin a guess cause I usually dont read poems like this, but your title stood out. But is the virus "Death"?...or not, im just confused. |
by MaSkEdSoUl
I also loved it I gave it 5/5!! |
Well written!!! keep it up 5/5 ;) thanks for the comment its much appreciated |
by Megann Lee
Ohh, very powerful, and deep, lots of meaning and darkness. I love it. |