Admiration

by enfant du tordu chagrin   Jan 11, 2006


This is a poem for someone brave,
who i can but admire
For she tries to hide her pain
Even when things are dire

She acts so strong, hides it away
so others don't feel bad
She laughs it off, holds it close
When she feels most sad

But it hurts to see her hide
when she needs to let loose
And I know if you don't let it out
It chokes you like a noose

I love her so, this one i mean
for all that she is and tries to be
But I just want her to know
If she needs someone, she has me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    This one is really sweet and by reading comments you left on one others poem, Ima gonna take a guess whom iuts about.. But being Lisa I have a high chance to be wrong so I'll keep my mouth shut, stop waffling on and tell yah how much I effing loved the poem?

    Woah, well your flow and everything was great so at first glance it seems like a good poem, but it has so much emotion and sweetness packed away..
    Its such I nice poem and you wrote it outta love and care Iloved it xD

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