Very good I love it and I feel this i have someone I wish would come get me she makes me feel just like the words u wrote keep it up 5/5

Thank you for the commentson my poems and I have to admit something I am married I have been for almost 12 yrs now but I still do love her and she is to maybe getting marrried this yr we r still friends and we do still hold hands and hugg when we see each other the problem is I never get to spend time with her any more her man is to controling he runns her life she is 26 he is 50 and she has health issues also so I worry alot about her but never get to see or talk to her any more that is what hurts the most

Wow that was reallllllllllllly good, great job, keep it up!!!!!

~PB~

This is really good thanks for commenting my poems well yeah welcome to my favorite list :)
marady

Wow! i lvoe the "bleeding you" part. that is so inspiring. im serious too. my god, you are an awesome writer!

I think your expression of love is that of desperation. a need that you work so hard to reveil. i've felt the same way before. when i've been stuck inside my mind for so long and someone comes around that grabs my soul, i want so much to let them know how i feel, but i find myself a blithering fool.
once againe your writing is a dipiction of honesty. you remain tride and true with your style. keep it up!!!!!
phillip :)

Speechless................5/5