Comments : But...

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexie

    I really liked this poem. Very emotional. Good Job

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very strong feelings in this.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by †Undone♥

    You are such a good writer. And thanks for kinda being there for me when I need someone to talk to.

  • 18 years ago

    by Suri dawn

    This is an AMAZING poem!I love it so much yet its so sad.You are so awsome!Keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by KJ

    ...By far, the best piece I've read so far by you. It shows great emotion, very deep in thoughts. I liked the vocab, simple but deep. Very good job =}
    5/5

    PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS