by Ashleigh Skye Jan 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
If my soul was a building, |
by Sole
Metaphorically, you're poem was like the house in your poem. . . Nice. Wear the fake smile, but through it is pain. Write a great poem - but perhaps the writer sees it as a little more... Aboslutely amazing poem, great flow, rhymes, words, stanza's and a very powerful ending. |
by *~vixen~*
I loved reading beetween the lines on this one. 5/5 |
by Little Dot
Amazing work. This poem was very creative and different. It was really well written. |
by Lu
I think you have done a wonderful piece . I really did enjoy reading it. Very unique. |
Oh, wow! that was an excellent poem! so much emotion. i can relate fully. great job hun, stay strong. |