Wow! fantastic imagery, you really brought this poem to life. a very interesting view, and a great poem. keep it up. :D

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BRILLIANT - I love it in fact I felt it - I can relate to it 5/5 you might like to read my 'Secret Message' its got some similarities to yours but it isnt so poetic like yours. I LOVE IT =)

Wow i loved how you described the bulding that was actually you so unique good job.

Oh, wow! that was an excellent poem! so much emotion. i can relate fully. great job hun, stay strong.
**lisa**

I think you have done a wonderful piece . I really did enjoy reading it. Very unique.
Thank you for your feedback on my poem .....silly rhyming ...not alot of people would think it is funny unless they were in the coffee,conversation&poetry group of which I am.....the poem was about my fellow members . Honesty is the best policy......

Amazing work. This poem was very creative and different. It was really well written.

I loved reading beetween the lines on this one. 5/5

Metaphorically, you're poem was like the house in your poem. . . Nice. Wear the fake smile, but through it is pain. Write a great poem - but perhaps the writer sees it as a little more... Aboslutely amazing poem, great flow, rhymes, words, stanza's and a very powerful ending.

Peace. [Sole]