Comments : The Elegant Flight of A Butterfly

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Weaving through the flowers
    Stopping by each one
    Until she is fulfilled
    And her hungriness is gone....

    Beautiful, wonderful, great, amazing and cute poem my friend! ^_^ Lots of details and the flow was great. Take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Ohhh very good approach to this poem Simon. It's a beautiful thing to write about, and you definitely brought out the best of qualities. Well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Oh wow, Simon! This is so beautifully written and the flow was amazing! Excellent write! I truly loved this! ;o)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautiful Simon, you painted this picture beautifully.

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    One of my favorite things are butterflies and you have captured their beauty perfectly within this write. Breathtaking....

  • 18 years ago

    by Erika Lahti

    Wow! i like your poem. its so peaceful. very very well writen

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Ahhh what a beautiful poem . You can picture the journey within each stanza .
    Wonderfully written , beautifully expressed, Simon . I loved it !