Weaving through the flowers |
by Darien
Ohhh very good approach to this poem Simon. It's a beautiful thing to write about, and you definitely brought out the best of qualities. Well done. |
by Melissa
Oh wow, Simon! This is so beautifully written and the flow was amazing! Excellent write! I truly loved this! ;o) |
by Ann Stareyes
Beautiful Simon, you painted this picture beautifully. |
by Angie
One of my favorite things are butterflies and you have captured their beauty perfectly within this write. Breathtaking.... |
by Erika Lahti
Wow! i like your poem. its so peaceful. very very well writen |
by Lu
Ahhh what a beautiful poem . You can picture the journey within each stanza . |