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by nobody truly knows me Jan 11, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / other
Intense pain and suffering, All bottled up inside. Endless forbidden crying, Kept within my mind. Not a tear will you see, Nobody will figure out. My nightmares and reality, Or what this pain is about. **i don't know, this doesn't seem finished to me, but what do you think so far?*
by LadyPearl
I like it, Keep it going
by Vegetable
It does seem to be cut off too short, like you wanted to say something more. And when I was reading it aloud it sounded a bit chopy on the last line, like you need another syllable. But other than that it's a GREAT start.
