Thats so sweet...i love that poem...ur an awesome poet...keep writin...laters

That was brilliant, i loved the rhyming in it, it kinda hits you when u read it.
Excellent poem 5/5

Actually good poem,

the story behind it is quite heart wrenching and sad, but the end is a bit confusing, to add in some critisizm(sp?) I would have to say
to try and add in a few more words in some of the lines so it would flow better,

When writing poetry the same amount of sylables (sp?) just sound alot better together when they are equal in my opinion..

A stupid example:

The cat was red,
and dead,

or

The cat was red,
and almost dead,

The second one appears to flow much better in my opinion, but that is just my opinion. I really did enjoy this poem though, and I think you did a good job. 5/5

This is incredible. You just have a way with words.... don't ever quit writing.
I think I sent you an e-mail but I'm not exactly sure. lol.

This was a very depressing poem but an excellent one no doubt...the end was kinda confusing to me tho but i really loved this poem and really got into it...i love all of your poems i say again and again but its true...keep it up and thanks for all your comments!
~Sandra~