Wow...that poem was amazing...such raw emotions...i had a vivid picture and i felt so in tune- i love it ...

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Wow, your really good @ writing. It's nice to relate to someone I feel the same way as you. it really does suck sometimes..

but your stuff is still really good

This is brilliant. the descriptions are so vivid you can see it all playing out in your mind. really brilliantly written and put together.

5/5

Wow. just....wow. thats sooo touching and powerful the way you wrote as if to someone else with the questions. that has some meaning deeper than most know. awesome

This was amazing. Its so touching and imaginative, I think that the word. You write so good, I had to comment on a couple more. Keep writing!

--*NaydeeN*

That was an awesome poem. Such a sad image - but it really had bare flaws :) My favourite lines were

I see my arm covered in scars,
From a time when they were crimson kissed

Such amazing vocabulary to use there. I hope all is ok xXx.

Peace. [Sole]

"I see my arm covered in scars,
From a time when they were crimson kissed,"
omg that was gorgeous! beautifully written and full of mystery and emotion, i love the twist at the end. verry awesome.