Drowning In Sea Full Of Tears

by Sango   Jan 12, 2006


What do you do when you are drowning
Drowning in a sea of your own tears
Drowning in all of your fears
But when something stops you from achieving
Then you end up leaving
Instead of staying
And begin believing

**Not sure if i'm done, comment & rate if you want, i don't care**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Damion xxx

    Who cares about the rhyming babe?? the words are true hey?? xxx tfdxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Alexx

    Hey i really like this poem, its short but deep, great work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Nice. the rhyming style was a bit confusing, but still, a really good poem

    Ruby