I loved it. Its very well written.
Heather

Its very long, and this sometimes puts people of a poem, but i loved it. it is emotional and catching and makes you want to read on till the end. So well written and i think you are a great poet. Well done
love Tara-Kay
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I really liked this.. it was very well written and very long but it kept my attention... nice job and keep it up...

sammie

Wow that was different but I have to give it a 5/5. I felt everything in the poem as it happened. I could picture it all, feel the let down the pain, the regret. You wrote this poem really well and you have great potential. Welcome to poems and quotes hun!

-Tainted Mikochan