by DevilzHeart Jan 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
The sky is getting dark, it's a rainy day. |
by joey calise
Good poem , but alot of it don't show the poem attic. if you know what I mean, your words are good but not in perspective. keep writing its not bad. |
by JAY Poet
Great poem i really loved it i thought it was really good your a good writer keep up the good work!!!! |
I hate those moments in life whe things like that happen. People just leave, think you don't care enough and never give you a chance to defend yourself b/c often times you do care A LOT! Best of luck to you baby. I did like this poem because it had a topic and was on something I could relate to in my own life. I like the last few lines, however I mainly just like the whole poem. |
by BeeBeeGun
This is a really good poem |
by Just Another Chemical Romance
Wholy fuk this is awsome you only just started writin? this is really good |