Very interesting poem. I liked it, but your word are good. Try to put more feelings into your words and then you will be a better poet. I am sorry if that is mean I don't try to be.
Heather

Wow! i loved it, its brilliant.
you are a very good poet
keep it up
love Tara-Kay

Very nice... i really liked how you wrote this.. you put a lot of detail in it and i am a detail freak so that definetly made me rate this a five out of five... nice job and keep it up

sammie

Wholy fuk this is awsome you only just started writin? this is really good
oxox
jane

This is a really good poem
and u only started writing
this is amazing
keep up the good work
you have talent
*-binkz-*

I hate those moments in life whe things like that happen. People just leave, think you don't care enough and never give you a chance to defend yourself b/c often times you do care A LOT! Best of luck to you baby. I did like this poem because it had a topic and was on something I could relate to in my own life. I like the last few lines, however I mainly just like the whole poem.

-Tainted Mikochan

Great poem i really loved it i thought it was really good your a good writer keep up the good work!!!!

Good poem , but alot of it don't show the poem attic. if you know what I mean, your words are good but not in perspective. keep writing its not bad.