by the love of another fills my soul Jan 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The rain falls as if it were my own tears. |
by Ariana
This is good, I like the honesty in it, your emotions come across very strongly. I work on the stanzas a bit so that it has more of a rhythm to it. |
by Kurt
Keep writing with emotion. It's never easy to do but it helps to stay true to yourself. Continue the great work. |